This is the list which we have recieved from our teacher, the list stated all of the things which we needed to do to to make our progect better and more succesfull. We have read through the list and this lesson we have produced and tweaked the clip to the best of our abbilitys.
We have cut the music clips at various different sections throught the video so that it fits in with the mood at the current time in the clip. The highlighted things below show the tasks which we have achieved today.
1. You'll need to clean up the sound, although I would hope that the music will help with this.
2. I wonder if the first sequence would work better if you cross-cut more between the "cooking up" sequence and the graveyard - this would make it a little more interesting and would break it up a little.
3. There is an odd black-out at about 40s - is there a reason for this?4. There don't seem to be any credits at the moment - is the film title supposed to come up before the conversation?5. Where is this going? Although you've now got a range of camera angles, you still need to hook the audience in a little more. You could really do with a third scene which is designed to set up the story and the characters. You have 45 seconds to play with at least - think about how you're going to use them.
This Means That the only thing which we will need to concentrate on next leson is adding in the credits to our clip.
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